Rain drops on my walk.
Just small splashes on my head
that dried right away.
we are already at the point in the exercise where i am actively wondering what is concrete and what is figurative. i questioned using the word 'splashes' because it felt so evocative. my face was still swimming in goo that may have had something to do with it. the word 'just' in this also feels too distant from something lived. interesting.
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